Stories Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part 9

Lilly’s arms were stiff. There was no abandon to her movement.

Her breaststrokes were slow and she kept looking back. She wanted to be out farther than all the people. She settled in one spot, dog paddling. She stared at the beach, her eyes darting back and forth as she waited. Nothing. Hmmm… She plunged under, spinning her body. Her head surfaced with her nose stinging. Ugh, she thought, I should have plugged my nose. The sun is burning. This isn’t working, not even a little. She continued treading water while her thoughts grew heavier.

She slapped the water and kicked her legs in frustration.

“Why isn’t it happening yet? I’m doing what she did. I’m literally mimicking her moves. Maybe I should just go back.”

She started moving slowly back to the shallow waters. She hesitated. She could almost hear her dad nudging her.

“Lilly, come on, we didn’t raise you to give up on yourself, especially not this quickly.”

With a big breath, she began again, going up and down, splashing water like a child. She paused to float on her back and took a few long breaths. The seagulls above were so beautiful. Then her eyelids closed and her body drifted with the current. At first, there was only blackness. Nothing. Just the sounds of the birds above and her breaths.

As she continued to float, her thoughts began to wander. She found herself thinking about the creatures of the ocean, how she had always found them intriguing, especially dolphins. Her mom and dad had taken her to swim with dolphins when she was a child.

The memories surfaced, more vividly as time passed. Her mouth turned upward, with a hint of familiarity.

A tingle ran up her spine as she began to slip back.

A pod was moving together, smooth and effortless. One popped beside her, inviting her to try a tail walk. She laughed, knowing she was playing.

Lilly began swimming like a dolphin; her head went up and down as she headed back toward the shore. She turned and took one last look out into the water. Waves hit her ankles, and her head leaned back. She closed her eyes again and took deep breaths. She’ll never forget the smile those pretend dolphins gave her that day.

Lilly stepped onto the warm sand, water trailing behind her, a soft smile still lingering. She brushed the sand from her legs and made her way toward her car. When her car came into view, her pace increased, but each step felt lighter.

The joy lingered as her fingers traced the wheel.

She leaned forward slightly, her fingers still resting on the wheel, her breath catching. She said,

Wait…

This is bigger than the moments of this day. Imagination made it feel real. I can use this when I write.

Maybe the readers can too… with my help.

To be continued.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part 8

Today was all hers. Her laptop would have to miss her. Just for today, no writing. She grabbed her beach gear. She knew exactly where to start, a mango and banana smoothie at her favorite smoothie bar.

She took her first sip and grabbed a seat to take it all in while enjoying the treat. It was smooth, cool, and just right. She took a deep breath and listened and watched the seagulls. The pesky pigeons, stalking scraps of food with such diligence, captured her attention briefly.

Then laughter shifted her focus. Two kids were busy burying a man, likely their dad. The woman nearby was enjoying it a little too much. Lilly glanced over at a group of boys lined up against a small cement wall, watching the pretty girls go by. She giggled, noticing some of the women seemed quite pleased to catch their eyes.  One of the boys, though, was staring at Lilly. She quickly looked away.

Her eyes moved to the water. The urge to run in was strong, but the smoothie deserved another slow sip as she gazed further out. 

A lone figure caught her eye, farther out than the others. For a second, Lilly’s heart raced. Was she okay? Lilly lifted her travel binoculars.

A woman, grinning wide, popping under and back up again. She hadn’t seen a smile like that since her Mama. She floated, then disappeared and resurfaced, delighted, as if she’d discovered something down there.  Lilly’s spine tickled. She closed her eyes and smiled. 

The lady began to make her way in, slowly. 

Once she was just able to stand, a wave knocked her down. She tried again, only to fall again. Her laughter never stopped. Resigning her effort, she began rolling in. Lilly’s eyes widened. The lady was headed straight for a poor boy.  She knocked him over, but he was just fine. Two lady friends came running to help her. All of them laughing. They helped take off her cover-up that must have been weighing her down.

Watching the ladies walk away, another kind of wave began. Her Mama would have been the first one out there, hollering back for Lilly to join her. Tears wet Lilly’s cheeks. 

Until all at once, She got up wearing her Mama’s smile and ran towards the water. 

To be continued.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Seven

They sat at a small outdoor café just minutes from the beach.  Lilly felt a soft ocean breeze tickle her skin. Sitting quietly at first, she traced the rim of her cup, her thoughts still heavy from the day before.

“Roni, I feel defeated. Maybe I am not the natural writer that I thought I was.” 

Lilly’s eyes began to water.

“Hey,” Roni said gently, leaning in. “Listen, my lovely friend… let’s change the subject. Let me tell you how I met Justin. I think it might help you. And if not, well… it gives me an excuse to talk about him.” She smiled. “Oh, Lilly, isn’t he something?”

Lilly took a deep, settling breath.  “Yes, Roni.”  She sat up and grinned. “Go ahead and tell me all about it.”

Roni began talking with a chipper tone.

Lilly had always admired Roni’s beauty, but she never noticed how Roni flipped her hair. She pulled it all forward. Then immediately she flipped it back, first the left side, then the right.

Lilly wondered if Roni ever noticed she did this.

She couldn’t contain a giggle.

Roni paused. “Why are you laughing?” Her eyes furrowed. “Normally our inside jokes include me.”

Lilly smiled. “You are so adorable. Happiness looks so good on you.”

Roni smiled. “Oh, okay… now where was I? I was walking the beach. You know how I love it.”

“Yes,” said Lilly. “Me too. I can’t wait until we can enjoy it together. Soon?”

Roni nodded.

“I was looking for treasures. Then there it was. The way the light reflected off it was stunning. You know how excited I get at the thought of finding a new pretty thing the ocean left for me?”

Lilly smiled. “I do, but what I want to know is where you keep them all.”

Roni laughed. “Girl, I’m telling you how I met the love of my life, and you want me to stop to tell you where I put…”

Lilly put her hand up. “Okay, no more interruptions. I want to know every bit of your journey with Justin.”

“All right then,” said Roni. “It was shimmering in the sun, and I just knew it was meant for me. I ran over and picked it up. It was a shell, and not an ordinary one. I had never seen one like this before.”

Lilly asked, “And so where does Justin fit in?”

“I will get to it, Lilly. I forgot how impatient you can be.”

“The colors inside the shell were so vibrant, a blue-green with golden specks that glistened. It didn’t seem real, Lilly.

“Oh, and I promise I’ll show you later.”

“And… well, I stood up, still gazing at its beauty.  I was so mesmerized by the trinket. I must have taken a step back, because… it happened. 

“Oh no, I was so sorry. There he was just lying on the sand, looking a bit shocked, maybe even miffed. I reached down to help him up, and when he stood, I dropped that shell. Lilly, he was the most handsome man I had ever seen. He and I just stood there for at least a minute.”

“You see, Lilly, that shiny shell didn’t just coincidentally catch my eye. Had I not been drawn to it, I would have never met Justin.”

She leaned in slightly, her eyes bright. “And it goes even deeper than that. What are the chances of you deciding to become a writer close to the time I happened to crash into a man who is an editor?”

Roni smiled, almost as if the answer was obvious. “I don’t think any of this is random. I was meant to be his wife… and you, Lilly, are meant to write. You just have to believe it.”

Lilly tried to hold onto that perspective. It did seem more than just serendipitous, but something in her hesitated. She wasn’t fully convinced yet that she was destined for writing.

To be continued.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Six

Later that day, Lilly hailed a taxi, holding her finished piece. When the taxi driver asked where to, she just stared at him, unable to utter a word. She was excited, even more nervous.

Roni and Justin were already at Garden Terrace. As Lilly walked toward the back table, she grinned as she got closer to the soon-to-be-married couple. He was holding her hand, and Roni was laughing freely. For a moment, Lilly’s nerves settled. She saw how happy Justin made her best friend, and for a second, that was her focus.

Of course, the nervousness came right back as Justin said, “So, is this your travel piece? Roni told me you finished it already. I’m impressed.”

In all honesty, though, in Justin’s thoughts, a different story was playing out. He wondered if he had promised too much. What if, in his desire to please Roni, he ended up hurting her? He knew it could backfire, but he could not show it.

Lilly’s hands trembled as she handed him the piece. Roni grabbed her hand and said, “Sweet friend of mine, don’t worry. I know it is going to be divine because you wrote it.”

Lilly held her breath as she watched him read. He didn’t show any expression. He didn’t say a word until…

“Well, Lilly, you did a great job. I felt like I was in the dress shop. Your detail was crafted well. I really appreciated your thoughts as you listened to the nearby argument between the mother and daughter.”

“Really, Justin? I’m so happy. I was so nervous you wouldn’t like it.”

“I do, but Lilly, it can be better.”

Her expression shifted. “Better?”

“It lacks depth. Let me ask you… were you playing it safe?”

Her eyes furrowed. “Safe? How insulting. Lacked depth?”

Roni’s hand tightened. Then she released Lilly’s hand. “Lilly, stop it. You’re being rude. Justin doesn’t have to help you, and you don’t have to accept his critique, but I do expect you to show my fiancé respect.”

The table went quiet, the energy suddenly heavy.

“Okay,” Justin said, lifting a hand, “maybe I should’ve started with ‘you’re brilliant’ and worked my way down.”

He glanced at Lilly, his tone softer now.

“Constructive feedback only becomes useful when the writer receives it as guidance, not attack.”

Lilly sat back and took a deep breath. “I’m so sorry, Justin, and you too, Roni. You told me a writer has to learn to take critique. I guess my ego is a bit fragile.” She hesitated, then added, “I just don’t understand. I wasn’t playing it safe… what do you mean it lacked depth? Will you please elaborate?”

“Yes, of course, Lilly,” Justin said gently. “And don’t be too hard on yourself. The learning curve is always uncomfortable.”

He nodded toward the room. “That moment with the mother and daughter was something. I felt it, but you moved on too swiftly.”

“Depth is staying with it a beat longer,” he added. “Not just what happened, but what it revealed. What did it say about them… or about you watching it?”

He glanced toward a nearby table. “See that couple? If you only tell me they’re arguing, I see it. If you show me how he won’t meet her eyes, how she keeps smoothing the same napkin… now I feel it at a deeper level. That’s the difference.”

“Justin, I think I understand. Instead of leaning into the tension, I moved too quickly to find a silver lining. I do that in real life… but in writing, I need to stay with it longer. Is that what you’re saying?”

Roni smiled. “It’s true. I learned a long time ago, Lilly’s favorite hobby is finding the silver lining.”

Roni glanced around the table and then back at them. “Speaking of finding what’s right, can we locate our menus? I’m starving.” She gave a playful shrug. “Now, let’s talk about something important… like my wedding.”

They laughed.

To be continued.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Five

Early Morning Writing Hour

Lilly barely slept. She was too excited to get started. Before the sun had fully risen, she made her way back to the coffee shop she had visited the day before.

When she stepped inside, she noticed the beautiful blue apron the girl at the counter was wearing. The barista greeted her warmly, her strong Southern accent unmistakable. Lilly recognized her from the day before and found it curious that she hadn’t noticed the accent then.

She chose a table tucked farther into the corner. As she walked toward it, she noticed the back wall was painted the very same color as the barista’s apron.

As she opened her laptop, Lilly remembered the promise she had made to herself the night before. Tomorrow, I’ll notice everything, she had thought. Now she realized she was already doing it. The details appeared naturally.

Instead of struggling like yesterday, she felt a different curiosity.

Justin’s advice echoed in her mind: Don’t explain you’re a travel writer. Show it.

Lilly began to write.

Here is what appeared on her screen.

The memory of the bridal shop begins with my seat in front of the three‑way mirror, waiting for Roni, my best friend, to step out for the big reveal. In the reflection I could see more than dresses. The entire room seemed to move around anticipation.

Nearby, a mother and daughter were having a brief argument, and I had to hide a giggle. I imagined that this disagreement must happen often in a place like this. It felt less like conflict and more like two people deeply invested in one person’s future.

In the mirror I also noticed the attendant moving through the room, offering glasses meant to calm nervous brides and their companions.

I sat long enough to watch several brides and their small circles being served those liquid nerve‑settling drinks. Each time, the same transformation happened: shoulders lowered, smiles widened, and excitement grew brighter all at once.

Yesterday, as I was leaving, I noticed a charming sign outside the shop.

The Enchanted Bridal Village.

At the time I hadn’t fully grasped the charm of the name.

Now, remembering the glittering letters catching the light, I realized how perfectly the name described the hopeful energy filling the bridal shop.

After Writing

She read over her piece and smiled, not just because she liked it, but because she had enjoyed discovering the details along the way.

This time she closed her laptop without disappointment or frustration. This time she felt like a writer, and it felt right.

She hoped Justin would agree. She was pleased with what she had written, but would he be?

A small wave of nerves settled in. Both her future and Roni’s, in very different ways, now involved Justin. For Roni, he stood at the doorway of a hopeful love. For Lilly, he might be the doorway to the writing life she was just beginning to believe in.

To be continued.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Four

Lilly woke before sunrise, the opportunity from the night before still pulsing in her chest. She slipped quietly out of Roni’s apartment with her laptop tucked under her arm and found a coffee shop a few blocks away.

It was still dark outside. Only a few early customers sat scattered near the windows. When she ordered and chose a small table near the wall, she eagerly opened her laptop.

This should be easy, she told herself. Just observe and write about what you see. 

She began:

The city is alive, already moving before the sun rises. Local cafés open their doors early. Quaint shops surrounding the café cater to tourists, their windows filled with souvenirs and local crafts.

She read it aloud.

The words sounded interchangeable. Like something that could describe any city. If she were reading this on a travel blog, she would close her laptop a few sentences in.

She knew because she began to close her laptop halfway and whispered, “No.”

After a breath, she opened it again and pushed harder:

The city pulses like a restless heart, its streets throbbing with the urgent rhythm of human ambition before dawn even breaks.

She stared at the screen.

It was worse.

Irritation turned inward. Maybe her dad had been right. Maybe passion and ability were two different things. She looked at the paragraph as if it were evidence. The spiral began.

Roni’s text came at just the right time.

“Lilly, we have so much to do. Where are you?”

Lilly straightened her shoulders. Whatever this paragraph suggested about her future could not show on her face today.

Today, the floral boutique awaited their prompt arrival.

She shut the laptop fully and headed back to Roni’s. 

The scent of lilies reached her before she crossed the threshold. Their bold perfume filled the entrance, impossible to ignore.

Further inside, carnations. She leaned in automatically, catching a whiff of their subtle, slightly spicy aroma.

Then she noticed the unmistakable Mr. Lincoln roses with their distinct, commanding scent.

For a moment she stood there, letting the layers of fragrance settle, the room alive with color and variety.

“Hey, Lilly, I need you,” Roni called, holding up two bouquets. “Which one? The bright white or the ivory?”

Lilly stepped closer.

“The bright white,” she said first. “It matches your dress. It’ll look clean in the ceremony photos.”

She touched the ivory petals.

“But this one,” she added, “it’s softer. It would feel warmer at the reception.”

Roni studied her for a second longer than usual, then smiled. “That’s why I brought you.”

Lilly shrugged. “Yes, you do need me,” she said, and they shared a quick giggle. As Roni’s attention moved back to the florist, Lilly’s eyes drifted to her hands. They were strong, muscular hands that moved with surprising softness as she handled the stems that had left their marks on her skin.

She followed Roni out of the floral boutique, the scent of lilies still clinging faintly to her sweater.

The afternoon was moving quickly now. There was one more stop before lunch.

Lilly slid into the passenger seat, delighting in Roni’s excitement. She talked fast, unable to sit still. Lilly rested her hand on her knee and said, “Settle down, beautiful bride-to-be. There is more to come.”

Lilly held Roni’s hand as they walked into the dress shop. They let go at the same time as a young fair-skinned woman welcomed them, holding two glasses of wine. Roni’s enthusiasm once again could not be contained. Just before she grabbed the drink, she jumped and squealed like a child in a candy store. Lilly had never seen her this happy. After a few moments, an older woman approached. She clearly knew Roni. “The time is now. Are you ready to try it on?” she asked.

The two disappeared behind a curtain while the younger attendant guided Lilly to the best seat in the house, a large, soft chair positioned in front of a three-way mirror. Lilly leaned forward, anticipation tightening in her chest, when she heard the outbreak of frustration. A mother stood firm, insisting on the dress she felt most proper, while her daughter stomped in protest. “Mom, I knew I shouldn’t have brought you. This is my dress, not yours.” Lilly chuckled to herself, thinking how often that line must echo between mothers and daughters.

Then there she was. The silk clung to her curves, thin pearl-wrapped straps resting against her bare shoulders. She turned slightly, and in the mirror Lilly caught the sweep of her open back. It wasn’t modest, but it was tasteful and elegant.

Roni’s voice trembled. “Well… don’t just stare. Is it the one? Is it perfect?”

Lilly swallowed. “Bestie, I have never seen anything more lovely,” she said, a tear slipping down her cheek.

As Roni disappeared back into the dressing room, Lilly studied the three-way reflection. Mannequins stood behind her, one in a mermaid silhouette, another in an old-fashioned princess gown. The mother and daughter were still squabbling. Every detail in the room seemed to offer itself up.

She stood. Her breath quickened.

The pieces aligned.

Out loud she said, “That’s it. Tomorrow I’ll…”

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Three

Lilly stepped off the plane, reminding herself this had been Roni’s idea from the start.  This trip was about Roni. 

Roni spotted her first and ran straight into her arms.

“You’re finally here!”

“You say that like I had options,” Lilly laughed.

“And I would do it again,” Roni said without apology. “Come on. I want you to meet Justin. I may have talked about you a little.”

“A little?” Lilly narrowed her eyes.

They found him near the exit, holding Roni’s coat, watching the crowd in that quiet way some people do, studying passers-by like research projects.

“Lilly,” Roni said, glowing, “this is Justin Collins. He works as a features editor for a city magazine here. The one I told you about.”

Lilly looked between them. “And your fiancé too, right?”

Justin laughed first. “Yes. The best headline of my life.”

Roni nudged him. “See? I told you she was quick.”

Justin offered his hand, steady and warm. “I’ve heard you’re at a crossroads.”

Lilly shot Roni a look.

“She may have filled me in,” he admitted. “Best friend briefings are thorough.”

Roni grinned. “You’re welcome.”

They started walking toward the parking garage.

“So,” Justin said casually, “Roni mentioned you’re switching into journalism. Travel writing caught your attention?”

“I’m trying to figure out if I’m brave enough to say that out loud,” Lilly answered. “Right now, I’m just trying to survive an assignment explaining why I deserve to be in a journalism club.”

“Ah,” he said softly. “The persuasive essay disguised as destiny.”

She laughed despite herself. “Exactly.”

Roni glanced between them. “She’s always written, you know. Even in college, she rewrote half her professors’ prompts just to make them more interesting.”

Lilly groaned. “Please stop helping.”

Justin’s eyes sharpened, not critically, just attentively. “What kind of writing have you done?”

“Local paper features. Nothing huge. Some opinion pieces and many incomplete drafts.

“Unfinished drafts are honest,” he said. “It means you care enough to wrestle with them.”

She blushed a little, knowing he was encouraging her, but she felt exposed.

Roni noticed at once. She slipped her arm through Lilly’s and gave it a gentle squeeze. “Hey,” she said softly, just for her. “You don’t have to have it all figured out this weekend. You just be you… and be the best maid of honor ever.”

“And what’s holding you up on this paper?” he asked.

“I’m trying to prove I’m worthy instead of just… writing.”

He nodded once. “That’s common.”

They reached the car, but the conversation didn’t feel finished.

“If you want to write travel,” Justin continued, leaning lightly against the door, “then write something while you’re here. Not about yourself. About what you notice. The airport. The way this city feels at night. The coffee shop we’ll probably end up in tomorrow morning. Write it as if it’s already your job.”

Her pulse quickened.

“And then?”

“Then I’ll see what I’m working with.”

She stood frozen, just smiling, thrilled about a brand-new possibility.

Roni clapped once. “See? I told you this weekend was going to be productive.”

Justin smiled, but there was seriousness beneath it. “If there’s something there, I can introduce you to someone in your city who mentors new writers. I’ve recommended interns before when I believe in them. But I need to see your voice first.”

“So,” he said gently, “are you willing to take a detour?”

For the first time since Greg Thomas had handed her the assignment and challenged her to prove herself, Lilly felt something shift.

Maybe she didn’t have to explain who she was.

She had to show it.

To be continued.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Two Continued.

with gratitude to Lori Sillman for this next twist in Lilly’s journey

Lilly wasn’t sure how all that spunk materialized, but she was thankful it had. So there, Mr. Greg Thomas! I guess thinking she’d just walk in and be on the next flight to Borneo proved her ability to dream was still there. She chuckled at herself.

Having lined up, in order, next steps was just what she needed to stay motivated and determined. Registering for the right classes was something she was familiar with doing, even if it was for a completely different degree. But writing a piece all about herself would prove much more challenging. She loved the idea of answering all the who, what, where, when, and why for someone else’s life. For her own, not so much.

Lilly curled up in her plushy armchair, enveloped herself in her softest blanket, and opened her laptop. How hard could it be? A full half hour and seventy-three starts later, she decided it could be very hard.

The buzzing interrupted her attempt number seventy-four. “Hello?”

“Hi Lilly! I have such news!”

Having known Roni for nearly twenty years, Lilly could tell Roni was excited with barely one word spoken. “I’m hoping you’re about to share it,” she said, her smile heard as much as her words.

“I’m getting married, and you just have to be my Maid of Honor!”

Stunned was all Lilly could feel. “What? When? To whom? How long have you been dating? Do I know him? Why didn’t you tell me you were serious about someone, anyone?”

Laughter bubbled from Roni’s throat. “Slow down! I don’t know what to answer first.”

“All of them. Immediately!”

“When can we get together? I’ll fly you here. We can discuss plans, and you can meet him.”

The girls hadn’t seen each other in over three years. College in different states will do that. Lilly wanted to go, but now? Seriously? Why did it sometimes seem nothing could be easy?

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Two

Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part Two

Lilly started walking fast toward the journalism club. She was so excited. Everything was coming together, but as she got closer, she felt herself falling out of place. Her confidence began to shatter as she recalled her dad’s conversation and all the inner dialogue she had been playing.

Is this even possible? I am probably fooling myself. I do tend to dream, but remember, dreaming is a great motivator. Come on, girl, you’ve got this.

Just as she opened the door, her aplomb stood up. Even if it was a “fake it until you make it” moment, she’d take it. The door felt stuck, but maybe it was because she was still shaking. She let go, took a deep breath, and firmly grabbed it with extra strength, and it opened nicely. The room was cool and very quiet.

She didn’t get very far before a tall man greeted her. Though friendly, he was intimidating, and her phony bologna confidence act began to shatter. Since she stood frozen, the man approached, and it was clear he saw how uncomfortable she was.

“Welcome. My name is Greg Thomas. Who do I have the pleasure of meeting today, and how can I help you?”

He was so nice.

Lilly smiled and said, “My name is Lillian Frank, but my friends just call me Lilly. I am here to find out more about this club. I think that I would very much like to become a member. I was hoping I could speak to someone and learn about what you offer, and if I might be well suited to join.”

He smiled and responded quickly. “Looks like you found me. I happen to be the club president. I was just heading out for the day when you entered.”

“Oh no, Mr. Thomas. I can come back another time if that is better.”

“Not necessary. I am more than happy to help, and please, call me Greg. Come into my office.”

She was getting more excited. It seemed he was eager to consider her already, or was she just hoping?

He said that he needed to know more about her first.

“So, tell me, Lilly, how long have you been pursuing a degree in journalism? We usually only consider those who have already completed their prerequisites and are well on their way to graduating.”

She paused and took a deep breath. “Sir, I mean Greg, I’m a senior undergraduate. My degree has been in veterinary science.”

Greg looked confused. He started explaining that she may have wandered into the wrong place. This was a journalism club for aspiring journalists.

She scowled at him. Displaced anger was real. The same defensiveness she had felt with her dad rose up again.

“Yes, sir, I know. But you see, I have been thinking about this for a long time. I want to become a journalist instead.”

“Listen, sir,” she continued, no longer wanting to call him Greg. “Is there a rule at this college that says a person can’t change paths? I don’t think so.”

She took a breath.

“I know I’m a good writer. I’m certain many credits will transfer. I’ve written, and I’ve even been published in the local paper. I’m serious about this, and I’m capable.”

She hesitated, then added, her tone tempered, “I would welcome the opportunity to prove myself, if you’ll let me.”

She realized she may have been disrespectful. His small grin, followed by a brief laugh, made her wonder if he was mocking her. Then he leaned in.

“Lilly, I apologize if I came across as dismissive,” he said. “I hear your determination, and you’ll need that spunk, and plenty of it, as a journalist.”

“I would consider you on two conditions. First, you need to get all your logistics in order. We only accept members who are actively working toward a journalism degree.”

“Second, I want you to write a piece explaining how you came to the decision to become a journalist, what you hope for your future, and why we should consider you.”

She had asked for a chance, and this was it.

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Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part One Continued.

I am so excited to share this.

A heartfelt thank you to Lori Sillman for adding the next bit. Her contribution has helped keep this story alive. I love how she captured Lilly’s mix of doubt, hope and determination. She added depth without changing her voice.

To all readers, comment below if you’d like to join in or even just offer ideas or direction of where you would like it to go. If not, that is perfectly fine. It is just for fun. I will keep weaving, bit by bit, but just like when we sit together, this story is even better when we create it, side by side.

Here’s the next bit, written by Lori…

Lilly couldn’t help but feel some of the disappointment and self-doubt that his words prodded, but she also knew she would only be unfulfilled by giving up the dream. She tossed about the idea of doing both. She could continue the last bit of her degree in veterinary school while taking classes in journalism. Would that honor her dad, and her mom’s memory, or just waste more money, slowing down her new career?

“Dad, I want to make you proud. I am sorry to let you down. I have to pursue this. I’ll work on the side and help pay my way.”

Paul could never let his baby feel like a disappointment. “Alright, Lilly. We’ll work together, and just so you know, your mom and I have always been proud of you. We may have shook our heads at your changing pursuits, but we love your ability to dream big!”

Lilly felt relieved, excited, and under more pressure than ever. She immediately looked at what classes she would need to enroll in. Thankfully, the guidance counselor knew Lilly. She not only helped Lilly wade through the credits and classes that worked for her new degree path, she let Lilly in on a little secret.

“There is a journalism club on campus that works with the profs and classes. They get to travel all over and receive credit for on-the-job training. There are multiple destinations. I can have the club president get in touch with you, if you’re interested.”

Oh, Lilly was more than interested!

To be continued

Sending warmth and kindness

Stories, Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part One

“Are you serious? I cannot believe it. Really, all this for me?”

“Yes, Lilly. This is yours, and you deserve every bit of it.”

Her father had been plotting and saving for years. Paul stood there in quiet awe, looking at his baby girl.

Lilly had completed her third year of college. It had taken her five years, though. Regardless, she was well on her way to becoming the veterinarian she had always wanted to be. Then, unexpectedly, she changed direction. She wanted to be a journalist.

Her favorite part of college had always been anything to do with writing. More and more, her thoughts drifted there. She could see herself traveling with her laptop, pen in hand, going on adventures and writing about them. The research aspect fit perfectly with her insatiable curiosity. It felt like a dream job.

She met his eyes.

“Why wouldn’t I pursue something that calls to me?” she said. “Surely, Dad, you wouldn’t want to hold me back from my desire to reach for the stars.”

Paul discouraged her at first.

“Lilly, absolutely not. I can’t afford to keep funding trial-and-error pursuits. And you know your mother would have wanted you to finish what you start.”

He paused, then continued, unable to stop himself.

“I’m certain you can still hear her voice as she dragged you to every practice, every event. ‘Lilly, you are going, and that’s it!’ You tried everything, art, dancing, debate. Remember the night you ran into our room convinced you were meant to be an influencer?”

He shook his head, a tired smile flickering.

“I didn’t believe it would last. They rarely did.”

Lilly felt the familiar defensive heat rise.

“Dad, you’re exaggerating, and you know it. Those weren’t failures. I was a kid learning who I am. You make it sound like a bad thing.”

Paul softened.

“Honey, I understand. But you’re a senior now, pursuing the one thing you’ve always wanted, your own veterinary clinic. I’ve watched you stay the course. Even through your mother’s cancer. Even after she died.”

His voice wavered.

“You never stopped showing up for her. You never stopped showing up for yourself. And now, just as you’re about to start your fourth year, you suddenly want to change everything.”

To be continued.

Tag you are it. If not, that’s ok too. Still, more to come.

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Stories, Bit By Bit

Oh man, I don’t want to go to work. It is that clock-in time. I am busy writing. Oh well, thankfully, it will be there waiting. No need to finish this little story today.

Wait, I can make a new page!

Yes, that’s it: stories, bit by bit. I can come and go when I please, or even when I’m not so pleased, like this morning, for example. I’ll write, and if time or ideas run out, I’ll just put to be continued, which is writer code for “I’ll be back when the mood strikes.” And since I enjoy sharing, why not let the process be part of the story. I can watch it evolve one piece at a time. Maybe you will join in. Tag, you’re it.

Let’s see where this goes. I’ll start with what I was working on this morning.

I am so excited. I hope you readers are too, even if just a bit.

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Come back anytime. The door is always open.

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