Endings Anonymous

Daily writing prompt
If you could rewrite any book’s ending, which one would you choose?

“Alright, quiet down, all of you. Especially you two, Jack and Jill,” the facilitator said.

Sherlock Holmes cleared his throat.

“I do have one question,” he said. “Why are they here?”

“Who?”

He nodded toward Jack and Jill.

“They’re nursery rhyme characters.”

“And?”

“This is a support group for literary characters.” He paused. “Standards ought to matter.”

Winnie-the-Pooh sat quietly in the corner, happily enjoying a small pot of honey.

“Excuse me,” he said, looking around the circle. “I don’t think anyone has ever asked to rewrite my ending.”

The room fell silent.

“Then… why are you here?” asked Gatsby.

Pooh smiled. “Someone said there would be snacks.”

“Attendance is voluntary,” she said. “Motives vary.”

Sherlock adjusted his chair..

“Clearly.”

“Welcome, everyone. Same rule as always. No judging endings.”

Old Yeller raised a paw.

“Excuse me… but I’m feeling a little judgy.”

“Nobody asked me,” Old Yeller muttered. “One minute I’m being a hero. The next minute… well, you know. I’d appreciate a second draft.

No one said a word.

Juliet quietly slid the tissue box toward him.

Without a word, the rest of the circle scooted their chairs a little closer.

“Every year,” Gatsby said quietly, “someone decides Daisy should have chosen differently.”

The room nodded.

“Would you want her to?” asked the facilitator.

Gatsby thought for a long moment.

“I don’t know. Sometimes I wonder if they’re trying to save me… or themselves.”

The room stayed quiet for exactly three seconds.

Then everyone started talking at once.

“That’s exactly what I’ve been saying.”

“No, no, it’s because they can’t let go.”

“I still think mine deserved a sequel.”

“That’s easy for you to say.”

The facilitator glanced at the clock and held up both hands.

“Alright, alright, one at a time.” She smiled. “Unfortunately, that’s all the time we have today.”

Scarlett O’Hara threw up her hands.

“What? I’d like to rewrite this meeting’s ending. I didn’t even get to speak.”

Pooh looked up.

“Wait… does this mean the snacks end, too?”

The facilitator giggled.

“Only until next week.”

Pooh nodded.

“Oh, good.” He smiled. “Still… I do rather agree with Scarlett. This ending could use a little editing.”

Into the Book

The morning was disappointingly hot already. She had taken her book out to the chaise in hopes of sitting outside, listening to the birds while she read. Just as she was about to go back inside, a cool breeze convinced her to stay a little longer. She smiled. This moment wasn’t lost after all.

She started reading.

Paul stepped closer, crowding the small space between them. Bekah’s shoulders drew in, her fingers tightening around the edge of the desk.

“I don’t expect you to understand,” he said, not even bothering to look up from the file in his hand. “Details tend to overwhelm people in your position.”

Evana stopped.

Her eyes flicked back up to the paragraph, just to make sure she read it correctly.

“I don’t expect you to understand. Details tend to overwhelm people in your position.” Evana repeated under her breath, reading it again. Then, louder, “Oh that is absurd. You are an idiot.”

“I am what?”

She froze.

Her eyes slowly lifted from the page.

“No,” she whispered, already shaking her head. “No, no, no. That did not just happen.”

“You seem quite certain for someone who has yet to meet me,” the voice said again, closer this time.

She turned her head.

And when she turned it back…

He was there.

Exactly as she had pictured him.

She closed her eyes tight, then opened. He wasn’t with her, she was with him.

There he stood, but now even closer.

He leaned in too close. She could feel his breath. She refrained from stepping back. Heat was rising in her.

Her eyes did not shift. She leaned in this time. 

She put her hands on her hips. “The audacity.”

He laughed.

The heat in her rose even more. And for a minute, neither moved.

Then she took a deep intentional breath.

“Paul,” she said more calmly, “you are too close. Please step back.”

He laughed again, but this time, he complied.

He looked away from her and shook his head. “You women are so emotional.”

Exasperated, she said, “You have to be a created person. No real person would be this ignorant.”

“Lady, are you crazy? I am as real as the pages of the book.”

She was perplexed. He seemed to know he was written and still thought he was real. More than ridiculous, he was a research project.

Well, he isn’t wrong. Books are real, she thought.

She caught herself. No. Not going down his rabbit hole.

Feeling disoriented, she placed her hand against the wall.

“I am so confused,” she said.

“Yes, I definitely agree,” Paul said pompously.

She’d spent enough time on this jerk, she thought.

She looked around the room, urgency building.

There it was. The exit sign.

She started to run.

A strong grip held her arm.

She turned, ready to hit Paul if she had to, but…

It was Bekah.

Breathing hard, looking up at her with wide, desperate eyes.

“Please, Ma’am… take me with you. Don’t leave me with… him.”

May be continued…

Would you take Bekah?
What’s behind the door?
Does she get out?

Stories Bit by Bit: Lilly, Part 9

Lilly’s arms were stiff. There was no abandon to her movement.

Her breaststrokes were slow and she kept looking back. She wanted to be out farther than all the people. She settled in one spot, dog paddling. She stared at the beach, her eyes darting back and forth as she waited. Nothing. Hmmm… She plunged under, spinning her body. Her head surfaced with her nose stinging. Ugh, she thought, I should have plugged my nose. The sun is burning. This isn’t working, not even a little. She continued treading water while her thoughts grew heavier.

She slapped the water and kicked her legs in frustration.

“Why isn’t it happening yet? I’m doing what she did. I’m literally mimicking her moves. Maybe I should just go back.”

She started moving slowly back to the shallow waters. She hesitated. She could almost hear her dad nudging her.

“Lilly, come on, we didn’t raise you to give up on yourself, especially not this quickly.”

With a big breath, she began again, going up and down, splashing water like a child. She paused to float on her back and took a few long breaths. The seagulls above were so beautiful. Then her eyelids closed and her body drifted with the current. At first, there was only blackness. Nothing. Just the sounds of the birds above and her breaths.

As she continued to float, her thoughts began to wander. She found herself thinking about the creatures of the ocean, how she had always found them intriguing, especially dolphins. Her mom and dad had taken her to swim with dolphins when she was a child.

The memories surfaced, more vividly as time passed. Her mouth turned upward, with a hint of familiarity.

A tingle ran up her spine as she began to slip back.

A pod was moving together, smooth and effortless. One popped beside her, inviting her to try a tail walk. She laughed, knowing she was playing.

Lilly began swimming like a dolphin; her head went up and down as she headed back toward the shore. She turned and took one last look out into the water. Waves hit her ankles, and her head leaned back. She closed her eyes again and took deep breaths. She’ll never forget the smile those pretend dolphins gave her that day.

Lilly stepped onto the warm sand, water trailing behind her, a soft smile still lingering. She brushed the sand from her legs and made her way toward her car. When her car came into view, her pace increased, but each step felt lighter.

The joy lingered as her fingers traced the wheel.

She leaned forward slightly, her fingers still resting on the wheel, her breath catching. She said,

Wait…

This is bigger than the moments of this day. Imagination made it feel real. I can use this when I write.

Maybe the readers can too… with my help.

To be continued.

Tag, you’re it. If you’d like to jump in, feel free. If not, I’ll keep moving it along, bit by bit.

Sending warmth and kindness.

My Dream Home

On a hill overlooking city lights, with mountains resting beyond the flicker, sits my quaint cottage. A single tall pine tree keeps watch beside it. I like to think it stands guard, ever present, through wind, snow, and the softest summer breeze. Wildflowers grow naturally along the front path, adding soft color against the home. A wide porch stretches across the front, with a classic wooden swing, a pair of white rocking chairs that invite slow mornings and even slower sunsets, and a soft screen door that creaks gently when it opens. This is where you come and sit with me.

The house is white with deep, rich blue accents. It feels elegant but warm, the kind of place that is beautiful without trying to impress anyone.

When I open the front door, I step directly into my reading and writing room. There is little furniture.  Just a beautiful rug underfoot, an antique desk waiting for early morning thoughts, a small rock fountain trickling gently in the corner, and a quaint tea table for two. I imagine my gal pals sitting there, steam rising from our cups as we lean in close and talk about everything and nothing. A big, comfy chair anchors the room, where I curl up with a cozy mystery before the day fully wakes.

From there, the space opens naturally into the great room, bright and open. It holds the kitchen, the living area, a fireplace, and large windows that refuse to be ignored.  The kitchen is simple, with a farmer’s sink and wide counters where I can spread things out without feeling cramped. It is not fancy, but it suits me just fine. I would never choose a galley kitchen. I want space to move, to breathe.

The bedrooms are smaller and tucked quietly toward the back. One is an office, not just for ideas to scatter freely, but because I still have to work. Dream houses do not fund themselves, and I like the thought of earning the life I live inside these walls. One is a guest room, ready when someone I love needs rest. The master bedroom is slightly larger, with its own fireplace and a window seat where I can watch storms roll in. The closet is roomy but not excessive.

The master suite’s bathroom is divine. The shower holds a wide rain head, large enough to let the water pour, some days gentle and other days strong. A built-in bench lines one wall so I can sit beneath it, letting the steady fall of water take me away, but not from this perfect retreat. A classic clawfoot tub rests nearby. It carries the old-world charm of curved porcelain and polished feet, yet it is fitted with gentle massaging jets. When the water rises and the jets hum softly, bubbles gather around me like a warm blanket. Tucked in the corner, almost hidden from view, is a small sauna for the days I need deeper restoration. The bathroom tends to my inner diva, while the rest of the house keeps things simple and warm.

Speaking of warmth, let’s meander out to the backyard of my dream abode. As enchanting as my front view is, with its pretty curb appeal, the backyard may just be my favorite spot in all the land. Rather than tell you how wonderful it is, let me show you the full picture. I have a feeling it might become your favorite spot too.

The first thing you see when you step outside is a flower, hummingbird, and butterfly haven. Of course, we have to consider the mess, so it is armed with ant moats and drip trays. It can be inconvenient sometimes, but the show these divine critters bring is sublime.

I like to watch them while lying in my shaded hammock. It swings so gently as they entertain. Most evenings, I relax in my armchair with my favorite blanket.  I do not really need it, though, because the gas fire pit provides both warmth and a soft glow of ambiance.

The front yard allows me to look out onto the world, but my backyard is just for me, fully private and peaceful, my little sanctuary. It is plush, yet with minimal fuss. A lovely stone accent wall captivates my eyes every time. And let us not forget the small garden labyrinth, with solar lights lining the pathway, casting a soft glow at dusk. At the heart of it stands a young tree, planted small so it can grow alongside me in this cozy space.

A couple of discreet outdoor speakers play my favorite spa music, just enough to soften the air without overwhelming the natural sounds. Even the artificial turf does not take away from the scene. It simply keeps things tidy, so the beauty can remain the focus.

As I move through every detail of this dream home, I realize something unexpected. There is something deeply fun about letting the imagination stretch and wander. I am grateful for the chance to explore it piece by piece, because in that dreaming, it begins to feel like more than just a sketch in my mind.